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A Message about the Message
Tuesday, October 6th, 2009
Have you ever watched a television commercial and thought, “Wow, I have no idea what you, Mr. Advertiser, are trying to tell me.” It happens all time. Advertisers, with everything they’re attempting to accomplish, can very easily find themselves communicating nothing. You can speak in a language consumers don’t understand. You try to be too clever. You can be too forgettable. You can say too much. You can say too little. Indeed, there are a million ways to mess up your message.
In direct response television, bad communication makes for bad results. In DRTV, the commercial lengths are often longer; the copy is heavier; and the need for understanding is even greater. Thus, while the longer format provides a great opportunity to really make your words work wonders, it unfortunately also can become a showcase for one’s failure to communicate. So when it comes to your TV commercials and relaying what you want to say, here are 5 ways to move your message in the right direction.
1 Make your words relevant and relatable
Instead of telling the viewer this is what my product or service does, try expressing what it means to them. For example, rather than saying, “This phone is equipped with a state-of-the-art global, galactic, digital-mapping navigation system,” try something more like, “With our phone in your purse, you’ll never know the feeling of being lost again and you’ll always know where closest coffee shop is.”
2 Stay focused
What is the main message you want people to take away? Think about it. Think some more. And then do everything you can to ensure it does not get lost. In longer format television spots, the big advantage is the ability to add more and more information. This is certainly a terrific thing because very often a 30 second spot simply does not offer enough time to tell your story. However, if your big message is “our product will make you better looking,” and you open with that statement, then go on to talk about how the product makes you smarter, taller, funnier, faster, stronger, happier, less stressed out about your job and better at Sudoku puzzles without continuing to reinforce your main message, your spot quickly becomes less clear, less concrete and less compelling.
3 Speak their language
No, this does not mean if you’re airing your TV spot in Texas you need a cowboy for your voice. What you need to consider is the fact that you understand your product or service in a completely different way than the guy sitting on the couch watching your commercial. The internal, corporate jargon needs to be locked away in a file cabinet. Be conversational. Be human. Be personal. Make your message feel like it was written from one person to another.
4 Don’t forget your tone
Especially in direct response television, the tone of your spot can often fall into the category of “what tone?” This is a big mistake. Because it’s not only what you say, but how you say it. First, you must think about the personality of your product, your brand or your service. Is it friendly, serious, smart, energetic or something else? If you don’t know the personality, envision what you would like it to be. Tone can help your ad stand out from the clutter and really get noticed.
5 Lead them on a clear path
Okay, so you’ve done everything you can to get a consumer interested in your product. You’ve made it relevant, spoke their language, stayed focus and engaged them with your tone. Now you must make sure they know what to do. If you want them to call, say it loud and proud. If you have a website in mind, put it up there on the screen as clear as can be. Or if there is a store to go, let the people know. Unless your product is well known and where it’s sold is super obvious, don’t be shy about telling the viewer exactly how to take action. And don’t give them 8 different call-to-actions either. Make their path simple and smooth.
The message you send in your TV commercial is everything. The words you choose, and of course the visuals you use, should work effortlessly to convey your story. Whether your story is easy to tell or much more challenging, you should always be thinking about that person on the other side of the TV and asking, “Do THEY get it?”
Tim Burke is a Creative Director at A. Eicoff. one of North America’s largest DRTV agencies.
Falling in Love with DRTV
Tuesday, October 6th, 2009
The other day I walked into a store, looking for a certain something. I was prepared to do retail battle, tracking the thing down, hunting among cluttered shelves and end aisle displays. Instead, a salesperson met me at the door, and asked me what he could do to help me. I told him. He walked me back to the rack in the store where I found precisely what I was looking for. I checked out and went on my way, clutching my newest material possession.
That’s what I’m talking about. Closure.
In a world awash with products and services of every description, what I’m really looking for is someone to help me figure out how to get what I need, or at least what I really want. Most of the traditional brand-sell spots that I see leave me wanting more – like having a brief 15- or 30-second conversation with a charming so-and-so at the bar, and then leaving without a phone number or a way to take the next step.
I want my DRTV.
Instead of a commercial with half a minute of clever – there are many, and I enjoy them as much as the next remote wielder – how about something that will also educate, inform, give me a little taste of what to expect, what you’ll do for me, your many virtues. And then let me know how I can get one of my very own. Right now.
Engage me, entertain me. But then please, please give me your phone number. Or at least your url. Now that’s the beginning of a beautiful relationship. Or, more accurately, a consummated one.
It’s been said that we live in a world dominated by immediate satisfaction. I’ll cop to that. As will anyone who finds themselves frustrated when they don’t get a reply within sixty seconds of sending a text. Tell me how I can get it delivered it to my door, downloaded to my TV, uploaded it to my iPhone.
Just please don’t make me work for it.
Mike Powell is Executive Creative Director at A. Eicoff, one of North America’s largest DRTV agencies.
The DNA of DRTV
Tuesday, October 6th, 2009
Everyone wants to know the secret to DRTV. Advertisers who wouldn’t have touched it a few years ago are intrigued, and are siphoning funds away from traditional brand-only television. Predictably, general market agencies are scrambling to learn more, to become facile in this estranged world of selling. After more than fifteen years in the brand advertising world, I’m a convert.
What’s the secret? Guess what, there isn’t one. There isn’t a step-by-step chronology or a secret sequence of events. At least not one that I could divine. Here’s what I came up with: commercials either work or they don’t. And as much as some like to say they have decoded the process, as far as I can tell nobody’s got that figured out. It remains, so far, a creative process.
Still, I thought, there has to be some method to the madness, right? I tried to uncover consistencies across the successful DRTV spots that we’ve done at Eicoff. It seems like there are four essential elements that make up the DNA of successful DRTV advertising. How you put them together, well, that’s up to you.
Element #1: Engagingness
Chances are good that the person watching your commercial hasn’t been sitting there waiting for you to invade their world. Your best chance at avoiding the tyranny of the remote or the mouse is to engage your prospect. It’s been said that the most important skill of a good salesperson is to be a good listener. But what do you do when you’re not even in the room? In the monologue of pre-produced video – on TV or online – the listening happens beforehand, off screen, with loads of research, as much as you can get your hands on. Immerse yourself in your target audience, appreciate the value of your product or service to them, and figure out how the two fit together. The days of shameless schilling are, if not completely gone, numbered. You’re really stacking the deck against yourself if you think you can bully someone into buying with repetition and volume – too many other choices out there. You have to engage, not assault.
Element #2: Value
Before you can sell anything, it has to have value, and I don’t mean how much it costs. At the onset of your message, remember that the value of the product or service you’re offering is exactly zero. Your commercial has to create value, enough that someone will not only be willing, but indeed want to spend their money and invest their time to get it. If you think the viewer is going to help you here, you’re mistaken. This isn’t the time or place to imply or intimate. Be clear and concise (more on this below). Be explicit. Demonstrate. Explain. Educate if you can. Share a success story. Does it resolve a conflict? Does it solve a problem? Does it do something surprising? Construct your case, and make it airtight.
Element #3: Clarity
Seems like a no-brainer: communicate with clarity. But you’d be surprised how easy it can be to get yourself off track. Know what you want to say, and then say it as simply as you can. Repeat important points if necessary. Don’t get too fancy. This doesn’t mean boring – it means focused. And there’s another threat to clarity of communication. When a client is in love with their product, they sometimes yearn to mention every detail. But if doesn’t mean anything to the consumer, leave it in the meeting room.
Element #4: Sell
Wait for it…wait for it…
Timing has a whole lot to do with making the sale. Sell too soon, and you’re likely to get the proverbial door slam. DRTV practitioners tell you to get the phone number up early, it’s a proven tactic. But it’s going to have more impact when it coincides with something meaningful in the script. If you can, sweeten the offer in case someone is on the fence. Don’t be demure, clearly ask your prospect to buy and tell them how (you’d be surprised how many people assume consumers know what they need to do). If your commercial works the way it’s supposed to, the selling is easy, because your consumer is anxious to buy.
Done well, a commercial that engages the audience, creates value, engineers exclusivity and sells soundly is a beautiful thing. It makes the phone ring or the website light up. It strengthens, or even builds, the brand, which provides value long after the sale has been made. David Ogilvy said, “If it doesn’t sell, it isn’t creative.” I can’t say it any better than that.
Mike Powell is Executive Creative Director at A. Eicoff, one of North America’s largest DRTV agencies.
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